जब थी वो ‘सच्ची’ ‘नामी
लोगो को पसंद न आई,
कहते थे कैसी है लड़की
चुपचाप अपने में गुम ही ।

अब जब बन वो गई
बनावटी लोगों की तरह ही,
‘बनावटी’ ‘नामी
सब हो गए खुश, उमंगी ।

कहते है बदल गई
अच्छी हो गई,
हँसती बात करती
पहले से बेहतर हुई ।

अब है नामी
‘उलझन’ में पड़ी,
जो आ गई
धर्मसंकट की घड़ी ।

क्या अब वो करेगी ?
अपनी नज़रों में गलत
होकर दुनिया के लिए सही
अपनी नज़रों में रहे सही
चाहे दुनिया के लिए गलत ??

फिर एक दिन
हुआ कुछ यूं के,
पूछ लिया किसी ने
“ऐसे रिश्ते हुए है मतलबी
कैसे तू इन्हें है सँभालती??”

तो हंसकर बोली
वो “बेचारी” ‘नामी
“आपने बोला न अभी
की बदल गई नामी”

बदल गई नामी”
बदल गई नामी”

This post is published for #OpenNTalk Blogger’s League hosted by Gleefulblogger & Wigglingpen in association with SummerBarn, Vedantika Herbals, Nyassa, Explore Kids World.

I am a member of Team 3 #InvincibleGang. Read some more interesting posts this June from my team members. Here they are and do not miss to follow them on twitter for more updates –

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Categories: Hindi Poems | 26 Comments

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26 thoughts on “उलझन

  1. Anagha Yatin

    Wow… you are a fine poetess too Nami, Anami!
    Lobed the honesty in the verse.
    #OpenNTalk #CrossBorderSisters

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    • Thanks a lot, Anagha. I believe My thoughts have a great connection with the pen than the tongue. 😛

      #InvincibleGang for #OpenNTalk #Week2


  2. This made me smile. Reading this I felt like I am reading about myself. Another good one! #roarwillrock

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  3. Wow!!! what a wonderful poem dear. #NISSATalks

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  4. Written from the heart…
    Kabhi badalna mat! 🙂

    #CrossBorderSisters #OpenNTalk

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    • This is something very few people understand these days. Thanks a lot, Priyanka. That feels good. 🙂

      – Anami from #InvincibleGang for #OpenNTalk #Week2


  5. Lovely poem and loved each and every word of it. me too loved writing in Hindi. it feel really close to heart. #OpenNtalk #Roarwillrock

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    • Thanks a lot Surbhi 🙂 Hindi is our mother language after all. But we feel inferior writing in hindi, which we SHOULDN’T.
      -Anami from #InvincibleGang


  6. Lovely post Anami and that also in my favourite language.

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  7. Beautiful poem. Every girl’s story. We all change…time and experiences do that to us…Keep writing 🙂 #RoarWillRock

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  8. loved reading it #BloggerBabes #OpeNTalk

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  9. Beautiful poem…. I had to really brush my Hindi for it but worth it #OpenNTalk #BlogAMile

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  10. Your poems have the power to make us think. It felt like one of my thoughts. So true such is life. Commercial.
    #NISSATalks Sudha

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    • I am so glad you can relate to my thoughts too. Yes, life is like this only, it is on us what we choose from it. Thanks for dropping by.



  11. Ise kehte hai Kalyug, log kabhi sacche logon ki kadar nahi karte hai. People often have mistaken good souls and attract towards negative forces and that’s the worst situation 😦
    #OpenNTalk #InvincibleGang


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    • Haan. Sachhe kya aajkal to kisi ki bhi kadar nahi he, siwaye MATLAB ke. Nowadays everything has become “give and take” types. Thanks for sharing your views Varsha. 🙂


  12. I wish atleast for herself Nami remains unchanged. Changing is inevitable, but changing against out wishes for others sake is a punishment.
    #OpenNTalk #BloggerBabes


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    • Sometimes you feel so dorky that you have to change. I also wish she remains unchanged. 🙂 Thanks for sharing your views.



  13. Such a wonderful post. #OpenNTalk #BloggerBabes


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