One Too Many


Needs are few
But wishes brew
One gets fulfilled
Another crops up.
Need is one
Wishes too many.

He tricked her
Into the room.
She was tired.
Of all the
past memories.
She wants to get
rid of the thoughts.
He intents
the extreme.
Extreme of…
Of the drinks
Of the love
Of the lust
Of the desire.
She still…
wants to escape
Her own thoughts.
They have had
One too many.
He spilled,
his secrets.
She smiled.

Needs are few
But wishes brew.


This post is written for BAR-A-THON Edition 3 from July 2nd, 2018 to July 15th, 2018 with Blog-A-Rhythm

Linking to Day 1 prompt – One Too Many

Categories: BAR-A-THON, English Poems | Tags: , , , | 6 Comments

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6 thoughts on “One Too Many

  1. Thatโ€™s one strong poem having plenty of layers within and a nice usage of the prompt, Anami.

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  2. syncwithdeep

    So deep.. Hard core truths.. Lovely anami..

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  3. A lot is revealed in these few words. Good one for the prompt!


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